Wednesday, 20 November 2013


I was diving down a long road, I was going as slow as an obese panda climbing a tree. 
As I got closer to a corner I could see big machines pumping smoke into the air.
I could see dying trees and and black skys.


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  1. Anonymous20 November 2013 at 12:19

    Next time try to write twice as much, try and focus on punctuation and spelling. Your quantity wasn't the best but some of the vocabulary you used were better than usual. Your simile was hilarious... Nice Work :-)

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